|Reviews for Equality|
| Lan Jian chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Ppl have their own problems to deal with to be burdened with more problems. That's probably y the world is the way u state it in your poem.
Yes, we should try to make a difference. Even if the world is so corrupted, we should at least try. But we can't do it alone. It's kinda hard for one against 7 billion ppl.
heh, its a great poem, it can really get one to think about what other ppl face every day.
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Hey, your ending is from Shel Silverstien's poem 'No different'. Anyway, I don't think poverty and stuff will ever be done away with. It's just the kinda world we live in. Like world peace and all that jazz, it's never going to happen. But it's a nice dream...
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Very hopeful poem. I like the imagery you use. The fact you actually see people who suffer is good, so many don't or choose to go blind to others' suffering. Good writing. I liked your work.
| Logan K. Wolv chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
I have those same views! Otherwise, it's a good poem and it really gets the point out there.