Reviews for Saranai
bumblebee25 chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
that was an awesome first chapter! you description of kya is great to! please hurry with the next chapter!
Theditzywriter chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Very nice, I likey very very much. Very well done descriptions and great characters. All in all, an awesome story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter! _
Framage chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
nice, i like it. it has a sort of indian marketplace feel. descritpions are nice, and the plot/character devices are intruiging. im ready for another chapter.
Islandbreeze chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Nice beginning, I like your characters, and the descriptions while talking about the market. The bold is kind of hard to read, but that's just format. Very nice job!