Reviews for The Bride Hunt
ReinaLucille chapter 15 . 1/3/2005
perfect. and still, no homework done. absolutely perfect, congrats on a great story
hiphiphurray chapter 15 . 1/3/2005
I couldn't stop reading your story to see what would happen next and because of this I totally forgot about lunch...-.-...I ended up eating at 3pm...anyway I thought the story was really good and I hate to admit this but I actually started crying when Drew was hurt by Delvin with the whole list and answering machine thing. Damn I'm such a sappy..."
ReinaLucille chapter 10 . 1/3/2005
oh lord, as if i can stop reading now.
ReinaLucille chapter 9 . 1/3/2005
omigosh, im gonna be in such trouble! i havent gotten ANYTHING done! every time i finish a chapter i think.. just one more, one more.. ok, one more.. school's gonna be one big bunch of suck tomorrow.. no work done at all! too bad you're so good at writing! on to the next chapter!
ReinaLucille chapter 6 . 1/3/2005
so, i'm addicted to your story, and its killing me because i dont have enough time to finish it.. my homework just isnt getting done! all blame goes to you, this story is awesome!
Nala Ether chapter 15 . 1/2/2005
i really enjoyed this fic. maybe a sequel in in order. i was thinking (yes, as surprising as it sounds even i occasionally think) wouldn't mind seeing something about becca finding out about drew and dev and coming back to either retreive cara or blackmail money from them.i really enjoyed cara, but i'm not to sure about some aspects of here character, don't 2 year old kids talk more. i'm not entirely sure on that but i think that toddlers of that age have a lot more movement (i know they really like the word 'No') so i don't believ that the scenes of cara setting calmly on peoples laps or in the car (i did like the scene in the helicopter with cara holding her hands to her head, that strikesme as a very sharp image, and a very cute one at that).

come on and write a sequel, how would dev's parents and 'society' (A.K.A evangaline and naomi) would react to cara's parentage and the fact that here is this rich dude marrying someone with a preschool child?questions questions. i really liked the fic and would like to wish you the best in your further writings (i read this 4 times and counting cos i liked it so much). sweet
wanderingnachos chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
Seems pretty interesting... but right now its 2:30 in the morning and everything seems too blurry right now... I need some sleep before I read the rest of it... BUT I'LL BE BACK! lol
giddy chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
Oh my god... This is absolutely one of the most romantic story I have ever read... It actually made me cry and laugh at the same time...I am so glad they got together...I love how you ended the story with a perfectly synchronized feeling that doesn't give too much away but enough to tell us readers that they are together and will live happily ever after(sounds kinda cheesy)...You made it sound so beautiful without making it corny...That indicates to someone that you are a wonderful author...You have a gift my friend and you better share it with everyone else...I will be wanting to read one of your novels sooner or later! Ciao
SLigHtLy FrEaKisH chapter 15 . 12/18/2004
Aw...this story was great! And very well written too! I was late for work because I wanted to finish the last four chapters, lol. I left myself five minutes to shower and dry, iron my shirt, get dressed, and do my hair, which consequently I had to do in the car with out a mirror, while my hair was still wet. And it was all your fault! Lol. Darn your chapters were long! Took me like fifteen - twenty minutes to read them, and usually I'm a fast reader. Anyway, great work! Write more captivating stuff!

Later ~FrEaK~
noodleashy143 chapter 15 . 12/17/2004
This is such a good story! I love it so much and i stayed up til 2:30 am to finish it.
sumone u know chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
Comon guys this story is the best...Review it as many times as u can...GIVE CREDIT to cLiqenie...she deserves it...

girl i love this story...
xiaobudian chapter 6 . 12/15/2004
u know even though ur plot is cliched, its realli well written, and i'm recommending it to my friends!
xiaobudian chapter 7 . 12/15/2004
Yep! I'm just reviwing again, to get ur numbers up!
xiaobudian chapter 8 . 12/15/2004
I can't believe ur story only has 14 reviwes! Itr is way good! It so absolutely awesome, that I'm gonna spend all my spare time to review ur story! I love ur realli long chapters as well!
Emv1986 chapter 15 . 12/15/2004
That was one of the best stories I have read! I was up all last night reading it. Good Job!
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