I enjoyed reading this story quite a bit (: My only real issue with it is that the technology part wasn't explained terribly well. It seemed modern-day to me, then it seemed like modern-day with underground advanced research, but by the end, I wasn't sure what was going on technology-wise, what with Calla and Ambrose and all. I thought the importance of the technology toward the end gave it an odd feel when it hadn't come up much before. Overall, not a bad story, though!

I was hoping for more at the end. It just kinda ended for me and a lot of my questions are left unanswered. The futuristic world you've painted was kinda blurry to me. I'm not really sure how far advance they are. They seem pretty normal but then had robots. I didn't understand that.

The fire left me all types of confused. I just don't get the ending. I really enjoyed the plot and was getting everything until the middle end.

Why didn't Calla just send Bishop a text or something? I'm confused is Nicholas a bird? That's it Ambrose 12 just left like that? At the brain thing does Nicholas think that Torin is never going to try going further with Callan?

I Loved It

interesting story.

i love love love love love the story, but i hate the ending! I thought from the very first time that u mentioned cloning that Calla was a clone of the origanal, but i just thought that was my own f-ed up little head.

Thank you for finishing the story. Glad you did and that I stuck with it. Wow. At least some people ending up happy.

What a web you've woven. Hm. Callan is quite the interesting character. I'm wondering if he's ever been allowed to masturbate. Not that it's important, but it was a wonder in my mind. Very interesting plot you have thought up and and interesting development and use of technology. And what does Bishop do all day when he's not dodging phone calls?

I loved this story. I was so hooked, as strange as it sounds, I'm very happy I wasn't able to go to school because of surgery, so that I could read this awesomeness without being bothered-too much...

:)

I'm really sad this story is over, but I'll definitely check out your other stories... I'm in a bit of a weird-zone, you know the feeling after you finish something and your digesting the fact that it's over and really wish that it wasn't? Yeah, that one!

Great story, keep up the good work.

This story has held me in a deat grip from the first few chapters to the last words!

It's great! The plot was so intruging and deep! It's total an amazing story.

Though I'm still a bit confused to why Rechards really wanted Calla... maybe I missed it?

Anyway, I loved to read this. The struggles between Calla and Bishop were really fun to read And I'm glad everything worked out relatively well in the end. It's quite funny to read Callas reaction to his new job, it could only be him who would be that enthusiastic about 'suffocating groceries in plastic' :P

Aw, love this! At first it seemed like a light-hearted story, but then all the sci-fi stuff. My gosh. Anyways, love this. Totally awesome happy ending.

That was great. Well imagined, really creative and interesting.

Such a wonderful story.

I couldn't stop reading! XD

I'm happy for Calla and Bishop that everything worked out in the end.

Kalya

Hii! Great story! I love the plot! Sexyy too P you write with so much detail that at some point i felt like i was the character! Great great GREAT story once agian!

- Falln-