Reviews for Circulation
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Okie, I liked this poem a bit. But I have to say, I thought the spaces inbetween each line was kind of... bothersome! I didn't like it much at all! However, again, the simplicity of the poem made it unique and lovely. It read like a confessional and the last line was absoloutely superb, it really summed up the poem and gave reason for the title to be as it was. Lovely!

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Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
again i just love your style! please don't ever stop writing.
Ewigkeit chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
...I especially favor the line " and to purify with emptiness "...It is a little bit nervy, which is displayed well through the concise lines. I like it.