|Reviews for Black Day Part 1|
| sunscraped chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
It's a bit... vacant and underdeveloped, like a mvie that ends halfway through... not even a cliffhanger. I suppose the two parts don't really go hand in hand, and I know what I've done was read the book ending to beginning. I understand what you are trying to get across, but the message needs to be a bit clearer and not so half-assed. However, it does have your touch to it.
| Mayaj chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
Hm lovely and blechy in that wonderful Alex Blakeish combination... S'about school, am I right? No, maybe not school... though it does have a very strong feeling of kidishness... I like it, anyway, the ending's a bit vacant, though.