Reviews for My Collection of Renga
simpleplan13 chapter 5 . 3/30/2005
ncie poem & he is an awesome writer
simpleplan13 chapter 4 . 3/30/2005
so true and great question
Vince chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Interesting very vivid descriptions
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 3/27/2005
very powerful... I love the whole Sin thing
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Me like
Silver Phoenix Falling chapter 2 . 12/19/2004
I love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!
yayya chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
how borin
Beau chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Good use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique

Echoes of Lord Byron

Very unique and quite good

improvements:

none

you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet

maybe that's the effect you're going for?

over all quite good
Natalie chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
woot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles
Living on Dreams chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Hey Danielle-chan!

Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...

But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!

Missa-chan