Reviews for Iolar foluan ard
Great Big Iron Boat chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Hi (again), you wrote "Laoch múiscail isteach titim na hoíche" meaning "Soldier awake in the dark of night"I think "titim na hoíche" should be:"i dorchadas na hoíche", not sure of the spelling in that, but that means "in the dark of the night" but what you have written means "night fell", as in dusk just broke, making sense? sprry if I sound nagging. I normally don't like irish poetry, cause the irish poets seem to have a thing to do with pain and suffering and loss, though I do quite like your stuff, especially the translations at the end ;)