Reviews for A Broken Angel's Tears
lovemystryxxkiss chapter 18 . 8/18/2014
Loved it xxx
Eternally-Precious chapter 18 . 2/15/2011
im happy now that god wo
Eternally-Precious chapter 11 . 2/15/2011
i liked matt better i hate girls who act like that other than that good
Dalek17 chapter 18 . 8/13/2010
Aw... yay... I love happy endings... I don't know if you're still updating and writing this story, but it is great... Fantastic work! )
Dalek17 chapter 9 . 8/13/2010
Oh my goodness. I am so sorry. I had no idea that the first part actually happened to you! It must have been terrible... Though it proboably doesn't mean much for some random person to say this... I can't even imagine, though... I am so so sorry that some of this really happened to you... geez... Just always know that God is with you and loves you no matter what...
Dalek17 chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
Darn... I liked Matt. They could have run away together... I don't understand why you changed the guy...
Dalek17 chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
Oh geez... This is horrible! Not your writing, your a fantastic writer! But that her dad somehow escaped jail and tried to come back for her... omg...
Dalek17 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
This is totally off the charts awesome! I am so glad that Angel's dad is getting a life sentence! He deserves it... and now Angel and Matt can be together... this is really good and I can't wait to finish reading it! )
Does it matter chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
God this is terrible. I haven't the faintest idea how I managed to stumble across it. She gets raped by her dad while her boyfriend is there, then in rapid succession he is arrested and she suddenly feels incredibly horny for her boyfriend? Right. This is chock-full of cliches and honestly made me feel a little ill to read. Seriously, though? "A Broken Angel's Tears"? And the fact that you've obviously deleted all the "mean" - and by "mean" I mean "accurate" - reviews just goes to show that you think too highly of yourself to even consider that you might not be cut out for writing. Do everyone a favor and take this down - it is substandard in every imaginable way.
smurf-love chapter 7 . 8/12/2007
hey this story is so good i cant beleive that her father would do that its so gross
K chapter 9 . 3/16/2007
ok, so i just read your second author's note and perhaps you didn't know about reviewing, but the bad reviews are just as useful as the good reviews. constructive criticism. every author can use it. you seem to be completely ignoring this fact though. and the tone of that author's note is atrocious. saying that you "don't want crap" on your review list. well, tough. if this is part of your life that you are writing about then it doesn't hurt to actually look up the details and background of things.

so construct on these bad and crap reviews that you have been getting, quit complaining and ask what needs improving.
K chapter 3 . 3/1/2007
this story moves too fast with too little detail. you get a little too wrapped up with your writing and don't build on the scene backgrounds well enough. for example: someone doesn't just get immediately sentenced to life in prison without a trial. that's just not the way things work.
jor chapter 9 . 3/30/2006
i really am sorry and yeah bitches sorry lol
Guest chapter 18 . 3/23/2006
great story! when are you gunna update?
two hundred and forty dollars chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Don't write about rape if you know nothing of rape.
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