|Reviews for Deity :Title Subejct to Change:|
| Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I like this. I loved the description and the plot has great potential. However, you use a bit too much passive voice. Pathetic? No. I wouldn't call this pathetic at all.
| Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
A new story! W00t-ness. _
| Fohruun of the Phoenix Class chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Wow. That's really cool. I like the name. This is gonna be cool. n_n
| Libby Lou chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Yesh, I like it. I'd have to see how the story unfolds to see if I like the name. But it sounds cool so far. Yay!
| Katie-chan chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Hm...interesting. You'd better not drop Greava. And you'll be happy to know that Andy wrote SIX PAGES of GOTU today! Doesn't that make you happy? Oh, and good write...this is interesting. Love the descriptive images.