|Reviews for I'm A Cutter|
| Herminia chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
This is very well crafted. I liked the line " 'I'm a cutter what can I say..." as it made the poem all the more realistic.
| you're a cutter chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
oMg! i totaly get wat ur sayin!1
You're saying that you're a pimple-faced over priviledged imbecile who can't write for shit. don't write 'coz' instead of 'cause'... don't write about cutting.. .it's the most overdone, cliched thing in the universe, and just writing poetry about cutting, and glorifying it like cutting makes you some DeEp_3m0_GoDdeSS, proves that you don't even cut to begin with. cutters aren't proud of themselves. they don't glorify what they do, they get help for it. so if you did cut, I'm sorry, get help. don't write about it.
okay, but really. the issue here is. that your poem was just very bad. you have spelling mistakes, no word flow, no... anything. no rythm, no style. it was just a bunch of poorly-written lines.
| K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
I completely understand. Those words, they ALWAYS burn right there, on the tip of your tongue like no other pain, b/c it's not really pain at all it's just... torture... b/c u know that the words u most need to tell someone, tell yourself, are the words that you can never say. It would destroy you... anywho, I though it was great. keep up the writing.
| SportylilChica chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
It's so well written. Your emotions truly shine through this poem. It's so sad but beautiful. Good job
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
some parts of this were REALLY well written. especially the lines "It’s hard to quit, as every cutter can tell you./No one knows the pain we, as cutters go through" because they are so true. the entire poem speaks aloud what many people feel inside. nice work
| lozfairy chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Another great poem...'I love the feel as it shows I’m real.' This is so true, for me at least. 'I can never show my arms, as the scars are so real.' I realised just the other day how visible the scars are. nicely written and the only thing I would change about this is changing the 'coz' to 'cause but thats just a personal preference. Either way this is good .Lozfairy x
| ReggieLove chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
i get this, i've been there, still am, don't get me wrong. dark writing is nice and all, but you may want to be careful so it doesn't come across as self-pity or what not. also, you probably should spell "coz" out the proper way so it sounds more mature. i like this message though, it's pretty true, it's hard for people like us to voice what we do to ourselves without sounding narcissus or suicidal. -reggie
| emily chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Ican relate to what your saying in this poem. You are extremely brave to write it out loud it is an art i have not yet accomplished. Would like to get to know you
| meganlouise chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Awesome poem. I love it! It is very powerful in a simple way. I am a 'cutter' and I know how It feels. Very well written.
| twistedtruths chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I really loved that. It's an awesome poem. I can relate to most of it. Great job!
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
just wait till someone sees thoese scars. 'specially if they're thick and dark purple like mine. people FREAK OUT. and then you HAVE to deal with it. or at least with their bitching. then they tell you to quit, instutionalize you and all that other shit and you want to cut even more. just letting you know, if you're going to do it, don't get caught. or if you know you will get caught, which eventually we all will, fess up. they'll go easier on you, thinking you want help.
| Kira06 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
This is really...deep...i really like your poetry. It is so beautiful, and touching and it makes you think. Keep writing you are a wonderful writer.
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Wow...That's all I can say. Man, I still haven't gotton out of here...I think you're pulling me in.. *falls off chair* or maybe pushing me away, I don't know..Great poem though, very deep and emotional. Who doesn't like a poem like that?
| Clayfoot chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
this reminds me alot of hte kind of shit i have to deal with...but you phrase it much better than i do
| someday-i-will chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Great work, I know how it feels.