|Reviews for Boxed In|
| AC chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
So much emotion! brovo! this one has to be one of my favs! really! it's that good. i like depressing stuff and this one's kinda there and yet... it gets you to thinking... not all poems can do that. but yours do.
| pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
Good write, I like it.
| Rimbaud's Whore chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
your sense of line was excellent, and some of your imagery was very good too. "Red rivulets run down your legs/ To pool beneath you/ Providing you with a reflection" this is such a powerful image, the last line praticularly conveying a sense of unease, and perhaps a dislocation ofr normal society. some of your phrase was a little cliched, for instance "blinded by the light of day", but mainly it was excellent.