Reviews for violation
The Proxy Ninja chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Simple, sweet- clear and easy. And straight to the point without fooling me. Crisp, too. Well done. Especially the definition. My question is, in regards to the lines: so subtle, what I see there,/what may or may not/be there".. Is she having paranoid feelings about what he might think about her, after having shown him a part of her that she regretted showing? Or..
A Perfect Sonnet chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
Nice structure and use of format, this was very effective.