Wow, nice first poem on fictionpress! The song seems a little layed back but it got to the point very fast. Just thought that you should know,

That as the One and Only,

Your better then all the Clones

Those lines where great, it made me laugh alittle, but you are basically poking fun at "blonde clones" and "barbie dolls". It was very refreshing to read your song in this type of atmosphere instead of cursing and practically yeling at the reader lecturing them about how the world has become one artifical clone army. You were very layed back and stated modestly, there's greener grass than pretending to be someone your not. Strong ending.

Okay... I totally want to sing this one...it's funny because I came up with this catchy melody in my head...which makes me wonder what catchy melody you came up with, and if it sounds anything like mine. Um...nevermind. Well I love all your stuff as I said before, I feel in good company as far as the "outsider" vibe goes. The songs are great, and definitly just your writing styke and ability. I hope to see more!