I really like the line "Pissed at life,Forget the knife", that's very good. I like this song overall, 10/10, keep it up!

O this is absolute GOLD. GOLD. GOLD. Anyways...it's beautiful...I'm totally feeling the essence...yippee. As far as the real critique goes. I have none. It's all gold. You'll get famous, and I'll walk around without teeth, telling people I wrote reviews on your songs, and they'll beat me with sticks and call me a heretic. Great stuff:)

its a disasterous cycle, i agree and i don't think it stops. THis is my favorite songs out of the others i have read so far. I actually like the ryming in this song. Update soon!