Reviews for The Royal Assassin
BJS chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I like they way this story is going but where's the rest?
Tiffany Keyes chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I didnt even know you wrote, but since Im a writer too, I thought I could give you some stuff to work far, this is really interesting and well thought out. For the most part there aren't a lot of grammer mistakes, but you might want to get someone to proof the only other thing is at times, you can repeat words, such as "tad" and "at large"...try a variety of writing!
Mystical-River chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
I liked your writing style so much in "The Book of Ages" I decided to try another one of your stories out. Another score on my tallyboard.
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
great job so far, keep writing!