Reviews for Leaving the inner curve of your heart
TheQueenOfSpace chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Very beautiful poem. I love the style of your writing. Excellent job, keep writing!
only weekdays chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
woah, the structure of the poem is so unique! And i love the title/first line! SCORE.
cherry-luard chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
This is an excellent poem! The structure helps emphazie the indecision and difficulty, and at the same time the bliss in the relationship. great job
Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
...and we see the source of your penname. The pain and longing within the lines here are absolutely overwhelming; although understated within the words, they still hold captivating power. There are a few spelling mistakes (incasing should be encasing) but they do not detract from the emotion of your work.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
powerfull and your words are filled with beauty.
deathfairy20 chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
very good keep up the good work
Kasatriya chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
This is such a good poem...very well written!
logical-unreason chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Beautiful... Every emotion is personified by every word, beatingly strong and powerful.