eh..? what happened? have you taken the rest of the story down or something? cuz i thought it was a great beginning, so...i'm kind of impatient for the finished story... and i just wanted to say i have read your other story, avery susan sanders is not an ASS, and i absolutely love it! you style of writing is very compelling, and i'm really impressed. but back to redfield connections. i understand if you don't post the rest for some reason, but please just say why, and what happened to it. ok?

Hey! This is good, but I'm a little confused. Your profile says that it's completed. Is this supposed to be the ending? If not, I can't wait for you to continue. If so, it's a little abrupt, but I liked the beginning.

Hi~

In your profile you said this story was finished but if it is, this is a very strange place to finish it. I was hoping you might tell me what happened?

Also, I would suggst not starting a chapter in the middle of one of fictionpress's chapters, it can get confusing.

Thanks, best of luck with your writing.

Superb. Albsolutely superb. I cannot wait to read it all again! I loved the plot and characters first time around - I felt like I know them. Reading it, and then finishing it, left an ache behind - which can now be refilled by you posting it here! So inspirational, this story is fabulous! I recommend it to ANYONE who wants to read an AMAZING and VIVDLY written story, which you can live DIRECTLY through the words, and get to know and sympathise with the characters. This is a thought-provoking, totally original story with class! yAy! Go gabby - go gabby! Your ever faithful friend :P ~DS~

Hello Gabby! Long time no see eh? :P I LOVE this story - as I told you in that prolonged email ages ago. It is SO fantastic and will be published one day - I guarantee it! Continue your fabulous writing! Talk soon, ~DS~