Reviews for Ahat Sun, Listen to My Frustration
heartkreuz chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
woah...thats really really...wow...i love how you have it written above and translated below, and how even though it's short, its really really powerful. wow...
blackoutroses chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
your words show true emotions. The line: "najane kabse jal raha hoon" is orginally presented about a topic that is so often done.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
beautiful!
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
It holds pain of a unique sort. Seems to have a bit of denial and disbelief in it, too, giving it a nice touch. Well done.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
You really have a gift for putting an image into a readers mind, I love this one too.

keep it up.
Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
is just so full of angst.i love the urdu version of it.i'm adding this to my favs.