|Reviews for Mary in the morning, and Mary at night|
| reflectionsofthepast chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Wow, this is powerful and engaging. A wonderful piece indeed. Well done.
| Skyefire chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
I love this work, it is so true... I will try my best to get a computer and post more, but that's getting of Love,
| mormonboy chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Great Poem. I enjoyed it.
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
I really love your poetry its all so well written and relative. Full of emotion and talent shining through. I will continue to read and revuew you soon when I have more time. Please do continue to write :D
| vintage fade chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
it's one of those poems that you feel like you can relate to, no matter who you are. it's also one of those poems that you want tears, but they won't come. it's one fo those poems you can read over and over again and notice new things. i absolutely love it. i wish i could give you something else for writing this poem, but this all i can do. amazing, job. stunnin, luv. keep up the good work.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
The mind's prison—others or our own—blinds us to maze's exit, 'til in desperation we find the only route. Still I think, that life's a treasure, that's only real when in each heart beats the love of the next breath. m
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
so none of us new...knewwas enchanted by the Fresh language... i think you meant French
wow... very powerful ending... in someways im definately like Mary... great job
| monotonedsoul chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
beautiful...each line is so short but filled with overflowing emotion...beautiful
| Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
really really good. i love it.