Reviews for The End of the World
Nersesian chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
i dont like the word "shrivel" i dont know what you could use instead, but im just not jumping out of my seat for "shrivel". maybe if something like "to lie, motionless, and alone, in the dark" but its not my poem
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
i like this. honesty is the best policy! lol awesome job buddy!
Just Another Face chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Ooh. Haunting. I liked it alot, I don't know if you remember me, but you reviewed something of mine a while back, McDonalds, I think it was.

Either way, I liked it discriptions!

Lyndz
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
i remember hte longer version... lol.. somewhat.. lol.. anyhow i liek this one a lot.. interesting concept and well done.. thanks for your reviews!
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Interesting. I love how you start the poem. Its short, yet a great thinking peice. Good.