|Reviews for How long can I cry?|
| somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
I would say cry to the end of time.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
wow still beautiful. seems youre on a tear/crying streak. u ok?
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
yeah i guess haikus (or haiku-ish-es) are more like feelings than other poems that focus a lot on imagery and stuff like that. Anyway.. great feeling:)
| ApplesCM chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
A thought provoking poem, and very sad.. Atleast I think it is. :(
its a true concept though. I can actually relate to this poem.
| Eirien chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Nice again, i like the combination of abstract and concrete ideas, this idea of the eyes running out of tears which can be imagined literally and is also meant metaphorically. Great job.
| Taos Ardew chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
short and small, and yet so full of emotion and sadness.
| nine iron chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
I thought I recognised your pen name, seen you a lot on Chistines works. She is a fantastic writer, hey I like the stuff of yours I have read. Got any reccomendations? I like what I am reading. Also 440 works! That is a large number indeed! Congratualtions on writing so many, I would have retired my wrist by then!
Keep writing but maybe buy a speech tool for your word processor, or I will start a SAVE THE WRISTS campain.
| NP user chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Oh! I love it. I can relate so much. I ran out of tears though...then you just feel supressed with job!~Nicole
| CrUcIfIeD bY tHe DeViL chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
O_O That was so good. Original and soo deep.
~ Noelle ~