Reviews for Losing Your Will
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
;-; Sad but easy to relate. )

~ Noelle ~
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
i liked the shorter ones better. maybe cause thye were more intense and all. i dunno. cool tho ;)
xHannahx chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
woah. theres feeling there. i love the way theres no punctuation, although you are missing a few spaces. i love this. Han.
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
oh! Another sad one! :-( I like this poem, but its so sad! :'( Its written nicel, though.
myno chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
yeah. i know the feeling. very sad, i don't like the swearing. Okay, i guess i should explain that- swearing in poetry generally detracts from the power of the poem, in my opinion. it is so commonly used, and so commonly missused, that when i'm reading a poem, it draws away from the power of the poetry.
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Aww :(