Nicely written and so very beautiful. Loved it. Great job!

OMG! This is so cool! Where do you find inspiration to write it? Write another one for me 'kay?

it's true...brief but full, you say much. I loved most: "Stubborn and defiant, but never evil." Chapter 2 is a 5-dimensional video clip.

very well written - keep up the good work!

interesting, i wonder how it'll be if it was in a poetry format

Interesting. I like the imagery you use in both of the mini fics, like "the anger flares up into a roaring blaze that flows like a river into my body" Love it. Hope you write more of these little fics, though I would only suggest to make some of them just a bit longer than these two.

Hmm, not bad. Not long enough, though. But then again, my stories are too long. And have too many clumsy vampires.

Your imagery is very satisfying to the mind...well-written, I'm interested about the other one you have. (GIVE ME MORE)