I rise...I like that. It ends on a positive note. well done.

I really like this one...it's endearing. I guess I like it more since the girl in the poem (Im assuming) happens to be my best friend...take care of her...or else! (lets jsut say extremely hot french fry in the eye!)LOL! ~Sammie

Hey baby...

I loved this poem...not just because what it was about, but really because it was a beautiful poem...It is really touching, and not in that cheap halmark way, but in that real way, that makes you blush and feel warm inside. My favorite was the last two lines...and you are right...she did see somthing more...somting much, much more.

Love Always,

Alice