Reviews for Our Love
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
Thats cool, but its more of a poem that happens to be 5-7-5
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
wow... this is how all boyfriend/girlfriend relationships should be..I like how you say alot while speaking little.. if that makes any sense.
Liviania chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
You're isn't really a haiku, but it is a very nice piece. Simple, to the point, and very real.

Oh. I like Cary Grant.

graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
short but says a LOT...really meaningful...somethin i can relate to too
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
with those few words, you put the meaning of alot of relationships out there. good job
xHannahx chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
i can relate. although i like the simplicity of this, it somehow doesnt feel quite worthy of poem status - more reflection. they should have that: poems, fiction, and reflections... nice tho, Han.
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
so true. very very true and very well said!
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
ah so true, you've written it perfectly into a haiku, well done :D
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Beautiful. ) I like it. Very simple and just cute.

~ Noelle ~
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
i really really like this poem. it's very short, but i love haikus.. er.. semi-haikus.. but anyway.. i just really like "with a sweet coating of lust" it reminds me of candy... or something of that sort.. lovely job

catseyeview chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Lexina chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Rings so true

so true


what exactly is Haiku {
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Simple, but nice. :)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
that seems cute till u think bout it. nice!
karmakaze chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
That's really the best kind of love. I like it.
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