|Reviews for Summer|
| Archia chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Ah dear summer, and just around the corner too. I agree with you on this, that is summer and it is such a wonderful. I'm not sure if you're aware that this is one straight line instead of broken up. Nice poem.
| lookingwest chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Wow, great simplicity in this. I like your decision, which I hope was intentional, to leave the first line with no period and cap "The". It really made me look twice and I like how it flows right into the next sentence. It's very almost, well, experimental. And I'm a huge fan of experimental writing, so that was a plus! Great idea. Love you end the lines with a period, it really gives it definite finality.
| jadedmari chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Nice haiku-the flow is good and the senses are utilized. However, you need to put it in haiku form, because at the moment, it looks more like an oddly punctuated sentence.
| heartbrokensoul chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
You might want to edit that. Summer honestly sucks. Every one is so happy with their summer love, that is why summer sucks.
| ysgrave chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
you left me alonegone to become who you areand this is how i know
i miss you