Reviews for Self Enlightenment is a Cold Meal
K. Starling chapter 2 . 2/14/2005
I like what this is saying, a lot. This:

Kill but don’t love, because sex is too obscene

is so true of American media. And very nice job with the technical aspect too - your verse is so fluid and beautiful.

Thanks for reviewing my work and being honest: I realise I tend to write in abstractions, which may have led to your misinterpretation. 'Your country' is America, 'my country' is not.