ugh just UGH.

THEY ARE TOO CUTE FOR THEIR OWN GOOD. I SWEAR.

AWW :)

So mushy, but still beautiful. I like how it showed Tess from Ian's point of view, nice to see how he feels about her. So sweet and for some reason it reminded me a bit of Romeo and Juliet. Not sure why...

Cute lil' bit of writing.

xx

Mushy? Yes. Plotless? Yes. Cliche? Yes. Love it? Yes.

I don't even know the characters, but I love fluff and this is well-written, so I can't help but love it. The couple is cute and they are almost sickeningly sweet. Props to for adding this to our c2. (:

Sappy: Yes

Mushy as heck : Yes

REALLY REALLY GOOD : Heck yes

It's so sappy and mushy that i acctually find it sorta funny

I just found this and I have to say I'm mad that I didn't see it sooner. Ian is absolutely the most adorable guy ever. Tess is so lucky! Nice job on this. I liked the plotless fluff.

LoL!

You're right. Mushy it is.

But well written anyway~ _

Beautiful.

AW my toes went all curly! and stomach tingly- good heavens you are talented- i can't say it enough! I'm so jealous!

OH, HOLY CRAP! I LOVE THIS! I adore this with my soul! You should write more one-shots on Chasing Mussolini! *swoons*

it is VERY good, plotless(sometimes, i reckon, plotless is a good thing), mushy, but definately NOT boring. it's lighthearted and all i can really say is: Oh. because that's all that is in my head after reading it. i like it. i enjoyed it.

wow i really like this. my fav one-shot by you (altho 'the best kind of crying' is also good _) update chasing mussolini soon, kk?

Love it! So, when are you going to finish Chasing Mussolini?

it was adorable. it really was. it was so sweet and fluffy. but a good kind of sweet and fluffy.

its the kind of story that just puts a smile on your face.

beautiful.

Aww thats sweet and a good mushy piece D