Reviews for Over The Bridge
Amalthea727 chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Actually, I don't see much crap here. One would think you've been in situations like wanting to commit suicide. Or that friends of your have tried or suceeded. Your writing speaks to me like someone trying to open the eyes of people so that they can help others around them. That's the impression that I get.
the-beautiful-tragedy chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
i loved it. the twist at the end was spectacular.
gangster-dolly chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
To be quite blatant: That was some cool shit. I really liked the twist in the end; to keep the audience going. Nice work.

DOORphrame chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Very nice. I liked the twist in the end. Keep writing.
Ethereal Oceans chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Ohh... that last line, I didnt want to die, that send shivers up and down my spine. Creepy. This is well-written.
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Quite well written, the dying part is powerful.
mostly water chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Lovin the last line. ;)