Reviews for Starting New
HeatherLee chapter 25 . 1/23/2008
oh my god. that was probably one of the best stories that i have read in a really long time. it had a happy ending but a lot of twists and turns which ensures that it would never be boring. i hope you dont take offense to this at all but your writing style reminds me of mine. you thought out all the supernatural things very logically. there wasnt much unexplained magic or mystical things. if vampires and werewolves existed, i think that it would be very possible that things could be like your story said they are. you did a fantastic job and i am definitely recommending this story to everyone i know. i cant say this enough: GOOD JOB!

Blackangle2011 chapter 25 . 7/8/2007
This story was great. Good job!
insane in the brain chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
I love what Jaylin, or rather *you* named Jaylin's puppy xD
celestial tears chapter 25 . 7/2/2005
I know this might sound bad, but I think Jaylin did Kenyon wrong...But I really liked the story and can't wait for the sequel.
sugarbarbie chapter 25 . 7/2/2005
I am so sorry that I have not been writing reviews. I just loved to whole story and am looking forward to the sequel. Just to let you know that the doctor checkups to the birthing were right on target, I should know being a mother of 3 great kids. Keep up the great work and will be on the look out for your sequel. :)
AubriannaKnight chapter 25 . 6/30/2005
overall excellent story and i enjoyed reading it. i just hate endings like that though, cuz now i can't stop wondering if jaylin is really going to be alright.
rae chapter 25 . 6/30/2005
such a sweet ending.* sigh*
Jessie chapter 25 . 6/30/2005
aw i loved it and i can't believe its over! i think u should do another vampire story because this one was so good!
Gentleman Theif chapter 25 . 6/30/2005
this was an awesome story...cant wait till the sequel...
Jessie chapter 24 . 6/25/2005
aw I LOVeD IT! but is it done... somethings gotta happen next but I wont lie. Im clueless lol cant wait!
jessie chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
yes im a newbie and i just wanted to say i loved the 1st part it was great!
AubriannaKnight chapter 24 . 6/23/2005
YAY! for Gavin and Jaylin. I hope the baby and Jay are ok and stay healthy..
TheUglyBeautyofTruth chapter 24 . 6/22/2005
Love you story as always!
AubriannaKnight chapter 23 . 6/21/2005
I feel terrible for Jaylin . She may have gotten feelings for Kenyon, but he never gave her a choice. Then I also feel pity for Kenyon in a way. The poor bastard really thinks he likes Jay, but I think he may just really be more controlling with a crushed ego. If she is the "one" I pity him that she loves Gavin, but i really belive she is not, and I pray to God everything turns out alright for Gavin and Jaylin. There are so many ways you can go with this story. I think there should be a sequeal.
TheUglyBeautyofTruth chapter 23 . 6/19/2005
Im sad this is coming to end but also happy to find it out. I love this story, thank you for writing it!
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