Reviews for Letter to Momma
AbstractMind chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
That was insanely intense- very colorful visual. I didn't want it to end. I can realate to it- I have something a little bit similar to this of my own. Usually I offer constructive criticism, but I can't seem to find anything. very, very good(by the way, thank you for reviewing my work)
sup chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
wow. this is powerful, especially the repition of 'Momma, Momma'. This cuts you to the heart. How many others wish they could say the same thing?
IluvTheRealNapster chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Wow. Very... deep. That's it. Deep. Isn't this more like a poem though?
Gilee7 chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
That was pretty powerful. Good job. I like the person saying Momma a lot. It makes it much more effective. I noticed you spelled knifes instead of knives. That's the only mistake I saw. But very good job on this. I liked it. It's very angsty.
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
So sad...good, but sad...