Reviews for Love has No Boundaries |
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![]() ![]() Mr. Watson by Kesha was put on repeat while listening to this song! |
![]() ![]() Your ability seems to completely change once you get to the sexual aspect of the story. The beginnning is rushed and the syntax is somewhat awkward and there are multiple grammatical and spelling errors. However, like I mentioned, the sensual part of your story is at a much higher level and I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() Terrible. I'm sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhh...You said Hermione...You must have typed the wrong name or something... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *waves* Hi. What's up? Are you well? I hope you are, because I'm FREAKING AMAZING! THAT STORY WAS LIKE...I CAN'T EVEN...ALSDJFKLSDJ The first half was alright. But the second half...holy effing crap, that was amazing...But where the did "Hermione" come from? Whatever. LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() This is really awesome. Love it. One thing: You forgot to chsnge s nsme. In one place iy says Hermione instead of Lily. Oops? :-) But HP fanfiction is great too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He sat up on his knees and hastily pulled down his boxers. Hermione put her hand on his and stopped him again. "Can I?" she asked, timidly. She had done this with Tom before but nothing would prepare her for what was about to come. What on earth? When did we make the switch to Harry Potter :O ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where in the hell did the random Hermione come into play? Seriously, I thought I was reading fanfiction for a nanosecond there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “"You must have something for Mr.C up there..." Sam whispered as he pointed at the teacher.” It says here that Sam’s a boy, well… at least it was implied. “As they entered they noticed that Sam and her boyfriend Jeff was there. But right here, Sam’s suddenly a girl with a boyfriend named Jeff. Apparently, Sam’s gender confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He sat up on his knees and hastily pulled down his boxers. Hermione put her hand on his and stopped him again. Woah, woah, woah. When did HERMIONE come into this...? |
![]() ![]() oh lordie...this is detialed..i was like damn..i want him...lol like she does. Well i liked it..you might want to write a another one of these lol..well bye |
![]() ![]() oh come on! you cannot leave it there! more more more ffs! we wanna see drama and conflict ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was deep. Short, but very intriguing. |