Reviews for Past, Present, Future
BeautifulEcho chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
I envy anyone that can pass of writing rhyming poems as great as that one! lol jus kidding! i couldn't wrtie a rhyming poem if my life depended on it! lol haha. another excellet piece! love the angst and darkness, and i kow how u feel about just dealing with the present. I love to live my life the way i want it lived, and i dont relaly care abut wut other peole say too much. i like how u included that in ur poem. great details and again, splendid poem! :)

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
I like it... nicely done... nice rhyming too
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
wow... if you had a chorus, this could make a great song. i love all the verses, can't say which one is the best. write on!
Odyssey2469 chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Great work, rhyming schemes are hard to pull off without compromising the integrity of the work. Yet you managed to write one of the best rhyming poems I have seen in a LONG time.

Well thought out, and Well Written ~ Odyssey2469