Reviews for Shrouded in Misery's Mystery Fair
pseudocidal chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
I LOVE the beginning, but I'm not sure why...it jsut seems perfect. The whole poem's good, but sometimes it seemed there was a syllable too many here or there. Love the start and the end though
Cassandra le Reille chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
I absolutely love it. The rhythm seemed a little rocky at first, but I settled into it before long, and it was captivating. I especially liked these lines:

"Always chasing down those rainbowsFor a pot of gold you won’t ’d like to find out where the rain goes,But you could never reach the end."

Thos along with "For heaven means death and death dissension." That, right there, is a masterful line. Can't wait to see more.