Reviews for Lonely House
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Wow, awesome work!
Last Dance chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I like this poem, it;s kinda sweet, and the last lines pulls it together and puts everything into perspective. Nice work!
Flotom chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
*giggles* This poem is almost cute. I'm glad you like your house... I cannot say the same about mine...


I'd be very grateful if you could take the time to review some of my writing.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
The last line is really cool. ) Made the whole poem come together. Really cool poem. Nice flow and not over done. I like. You stuck to the subject and kept to the subject. - Great job !

~* Noelle *~
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
:) I liked this. It's nice to love where you live.

Thank you for your compliments about my writing. :)

Keep writing as well!

~Namir Swiftpaw
The Random Witness chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
This is great! I had to laugh. I had to leave my old creaky childhood home to a really modern one. I was glad but i miss the character of the other one and i hate the way the new owners treat it. lol ~TRW
shinco chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
That was pretty funny! _ Cool poem, I love my house too!
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
I liked it. I never really could understand someone's love for a house. Apartments suit me better as it's all I known. anywho. Love the poem
Nausikaa chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
I love my house too. Great poem, I espially love the last line.