Very well described. I love all the imagery. Another good one!

~Nikki~

This is a grea story! I loved it! Please write more! ~Melissa~

this reminds me of my desert thing i have going in my fic! points for you automatically, heh. no just kidding. this is my alternate account, actually, to forsaken illusion. but i made some stupid irrational promise to never review fiction with that account, so i gotta switch over. it's a petty little thing. anyways - you have a beautiful style of writing. your descriptions are good, and you have the flow a lot of people don't, where you can write pretty much anything and make it beautiful. i can't write scenes like this - where nothing really happens, and it's just a Nature focus. you can. really well done. thank you for the fav nod, haha. i just noticed that randomly. really. i didn't even know you were reading. small world.

~k8