Great poem.

I'm totally digging this poem. I love the imagery... it just flows in my mind as it goes. Crazy, crazy, crazy. Lovely work, keep at it. -

very well worded and beautiful poem! keep up the great work!

I really liked this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. Particularly these lines:

The lazy breeze whispers

What does it tell?

Stories of frozen water

Golden sand

Lover’s farewell?

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Feel deeply

You cannot go wrong

Let your heart take you

To a somewhere

You never belonged

Really great! *hugz* Love ya!

~Nikki~

Beautiful and really nicely written! I love your word choice and this was just really well written! Good job!

Hey Bads! Awesome; made me remember how much I loved (and still do) the wind blowing through my hair! _ Your should write more... definitely! L8er...

This is very expressive; clear and thoughtful. The bit about the creaking door caught my attention particularly: one of my flatmate's doors creaks, and I'm dying to sit down one day and write its story!

I love the fact that imagination can take us anywhere and create anything. You express that very well.

hi again. i think i like this better than your other one. more obscure. tangible in its hesitant fragile tone. really nice, haha. and i like how it kinda goes all over the place, even though there IS a main message. it doesn't constrict the poetry. awesome job.

~k8

good choices of words. some parts that were confusing though, but everything seemed to flow, so it turned out well. good job and keep on keepin' on

~BeautifulEcho~