Reviews for Creation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm totally digging this poem. I love the imagery... it just flows in my mind as it goes. Crazy, crazy, crazy. Lovely work, keep at it. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() very well worded and beautiful poem! keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. Particularly these lines: The lazy breeze whispers What does it tell? Stories of frozen water Golden sand Lover’s farewell? - Feel deeply You cannot go wrong Let your heart take you To a somewhere You never belonged Really great! *hugz* Love ya! ~Nikki~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful and really nicely written! I love your word choice and this was just really well written! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Bads! Awesome; made me remember how much I loved (and still do) the wind blowing through my hair! _ Your should write more... definitely! L8er... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very expressive; clear and thoughtful. The bit about the creaking door caught my attention particularly: one of my flatmate's doors creaks, and I'm dying to sit down one day and write its story! I love the fact that imagination can take us anywhere and create anything. You express that very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi again. i think i like this better than your other one. more obscure. tangible in its hesitant fragile tone. really nice, haha. and i like how it kinda goes all over the place, even though there IS a main message. it doesn't constrict the poetry. awesome job. ~k8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() good choices of words. some parts that were confusing though, but everything seemed to flow, so it turned out well. good job and keep on keepin' on ~BeautifulEcho~ |