Reviews for Mask vs Freedom
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
I could feel your anxity as you claw at your mask. Really powerful writing you had me right there with you, feeling what you feel.

Keep it up.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
wow. i love the feel of it. breaking at the seems, tracing the newsprint ... really powerful imagery. to me, it's that kind of symbolism that resonates. dunno. could be a weird thing i have. you draw the reader into this really well. great job! do me a favour and check out something i've written?