yea, i just realized that the title could also be instead of "forlorn forever" be "for never" . at a second read, it seems like a mock to God. it depends how you look at it ofcourse, but at the end when there is slight repition of "hold us forever, hold me for-never" it could be that death has a greater effect that life after death, or the concept of it. It's like what we were talking about sort of. Others can believe 100% but we have doubts whats waiting after death. And the concept of forever aswell, is only a life time. Eh, this all must seem confusing but it is a long review and i have been slacking . Great song, and nicely writtin.

Haha, this is really good shit. I really like it. Please excuse me profanity, but you have a way with words, making absolutly nothing into something 'special'/ Keep it up.

Okay I read your song. lol. So do you have music with it too?