Reviews for Pooling Waters
Rayeli chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
Ooh, very nice indeedy. How could I not like this Ghost character...he has such realistic thoughts in this suicide situation.I like this. It's short, but it has very good writing :)
Kuroya chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Lovely. You've conveyed almost perfectly the feelings of someone about to commit/commiting suicide... Parts of it seem uncannily like my life- I'm not going there, but I thought I'd mention it. This is really wonderful work. You've captured a myriad of emotions with this short piece of prose...
Blue chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
I love your writing...very real! Very ironic. I loved this story.