Reviews for The Little Star
smile persephone chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
It's cute! It's sort of like a nursery rhyme.
Meaningless Julia chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
i really like the basic idea of this, but perhaps the ending needs tightening a bit. I feel there's a loss of energy towards the end. This is very sweet, though. You write well. Well done.