wow,this is a really good poem,it really is,i just love it.

this one is really deep and i think it describes exactly what you're feeling. this is also one of my favorites that you ahve written

oh wow. very touching amber, always strive to be yourself and don't worry what other people think of you!

wow, this poem starts out strong and just gets stronger and stronger, I can tell it might have once been a song, because the lyrical and emotional feeling of a song is there in your words, which are very decisive.

wow nice work. i love how you express emotions in their pure and unbridled form. keep it up ~

Beautifully written, good imagery but the flow doesn't work in some parts

i love it its my favorite one yet, of all the other ones i read :)your a great writer, keep it up

very good, keep writing

Its deep and Im very intrigued. Great job :)

~ £uvo

Very good poem, I can see how it could have been a song. Anyway, it's deep, dark and the situation is emotional, you can feel it. It was interesting, I enjoyed reading it. Good job, keep it up!