Reviews for Tears
Eloquent-Marionette chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
wow, such a short poem, so much emotion. i love it. i love the lines "i stand here alone/with a tear stained face" it reminds me of me. anyways, good job and keep writing and thanks fot ur review!

~davida
Munchin chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
that is so sad
lost lonely girl chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
yea it really sucks when people do that
Thyrt chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
i feel your pain..people are just so cruel some times..luv the poem though :)
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
pretty good, though it could be a little longer; it really depicts the pain of being bullied, though.
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
MOU!, i loved this poem al the emotion showed in such a small poem had a great affect to it!
AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
very good, i love the line "while words of hate are thrown in my face" although i can't sympathise with getting bullied i can feel the pain and suffering that someone getting bullied experiences, you said this well. all i can say is like *WOW* very powerful and the flow was beautiful in a short space you captured a lot. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
w00t! Nice work. Flow in this one was good, and message conveyed well. keep writing _,-Rae