Reviews for My Little White Rabbit
La Terraza chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Hey, I really really liked this! like, how it had such a childish sense to it, but at the same time it was dark and wonderful. Good job!
Pilate chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
This made me cry. I don't think there's anything else I can say. It evoked a feeling of... impossibility.

Amazing work. Keep it up.

-The Impecunious Dilettante
Catch Ya Later Alligator chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
I really, really like this poem. The rhyming gives it the feeling of a children's poem shot straight to hell. I'm adding this to my favorites list.

Oh, I also found this poem here: . ?storyid1806998

I don't know if you have two accounts or not, but I thought I should tell you, just in case you didn't. It's the same as yours, word for word (including the missing apostrophe in the line "Ill be your best friend." I know this one was posted first because A) I'm sure you wouldn't plagaraize from what I've gotten from your livejournal and all the lovely reviews you left on my writing and B) the date for yours is a month earlier. Just thought you should know about it.

Anyway, I'm off to read more of your stuff now. :)
The Rain's Kiss chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
this is very creative. i like the ryhming...you never ryhme...
Gir Garcia chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
that was great, i especially liked the ending...that was awesome. great poem
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
sounds cynical if ya ask me. but hey, it was very vivid and descriptive and i love the rhyming. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
bluemidget17yahoo.com chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
very deep very deep i like it but it seems very mean hearted to me but keep writing id like to read more from you thnks for sharing this with me check out my poems: Change, Doom, Fate, Worries, and The Wound id like to know what you think