Reviews for Spinning
Skeleton L. Crow chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
"...aches for" vs "...aches fdor"; "...does not" vs "...does ot"; "...fingers want" vs "...finger wnat"

Now that that's over, I have chronic sinus infections. NOT FUN. I like how you seem to tie the illness idea into your inner confusion. At least, that's what it seems like you are trying to do. Or maybe it's all just a fever induced haze... nice poem, anyway.