Reviews for A Winter Landscape
gatsby.z chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
this is nice, though i didnt get the point of view. is it decorations or ornamesnts or something? it's good though! have fun!
Winged Shadow chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Aw, so cool.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
A bit of a confused rhythmn but I liked the idea. Interesting take. I liked the story-like quality.
Grace Hsia chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
Jules, this is a very interesting poem! And describes many funny points in it (Mr. Smith falling and throwing a shoe at carolers, and then the dog fertilizing the!) Anyhows, keep updating your story! And I just finished typing up an email to you

oh, and MERRY CHRISTMAS! (And a happy new Year!)

DaybreakStorms08 chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Awesome! I love the last few lines; almost like people do more "living" on Christmas than at other times of the year. Hard to get what point of view this is; at first I thought it was a snowman, but they're ornaments, aren't they? Great job. And Merry Christmas!
Serenity Marie chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
-claps- good job! its great!