|Reviews for Seeing Through Tears|
| Just Wondering chapter 12 . 6/8/2014
How is it that Anna isn't a wee bit bitter that Rae somewhat selfishly escaped with no regards for his sister? I would like to think in a situation where Anna and Rae only had each other (no mom no 'dad') they would mean the world to each other, therefore it in no way adds up that Rae would ditch her there.
| smiling smiley chapter 19 . 4/17/2014
I just read all of this story in one night
It's soooo good
Girl update whenever u can!
I really like all the mystery in this story and how even people who love each over dont trust each other. It's so interesting and realistic
I also like how realistically you made Anna becoming violent, like her father. Anyone would
I love Seth and Anna- I hope they get a happy ending.
Good luck with school and stuff
Great story so far
| smiling smiley chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
I really like this story! I love Seth and Anna already.
Seth seems like one of those caring people that others stereotype- he was the only person to notice she had something to say and then even informed everyone else
And though Anna is used to blending in the background, I like that she has the backbone to get irritated when a teacher forgets who she is! That's a terrible teacher lol
On a side note, can u actually hum acdc? Lol
| Dwarfperson chapter 19 . 2/24/2014
Umm, chapter 19 is the same as chapter 18...
But really good story :))
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/23/2013
Okay, I just wanted to bring this up. From the last chapter to this one I felt as though a section of the story was missing. A bit like when you're watching a movie and start daydreaming- the next time you look up you're confused by the sudden scene change.
Anna's personality and relationship with Seth seems to have changed dramatically without the transition being there. They're acting playful when they haven't reached that level of familiarity yet I think
That being said I think this chapter or around here is when the story starts to pick up. From a 2D story to 3D. Your characters start to feel real, I can feel the chemistry between your characters, you show it and I love that.
| A Little Bit of Reality chapter 18 . 10/9/2013
Hi! I just wanted to let you know that Seeing Through Tears is one of the most amazing things I have ever read! Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us and please update as soon as you can! I love the story! ! It's in the Top 3 of my most favorite stories in the Fiction Press...heck in the entire world! I really think you are super talented and you will have a great future in writing! Never stop writing; you are too much of an incredible writer and I am sure, absolutely positive, even greater stories and novels are going to come from you! I mean, reading this totally made my day and I can't wait to re-read it again and again and again. Please try to get this published. It will be worth it, Seeing Through Tears might end up on New York Times bestseller! I can imagine it being a movie or a TV series (yes, I am bit of a TV Junkie, as you can see). Anyway, this story deserves to be out for millions of people to read. Don't tell me why...there's something incredible and real and so raw and passionate about these characters that you don't usually find in stories, especially when it comes to something cliched. Your story was original and took a drastic view in delineating characters that were so amazing and at the same time so relatable. (I really hope I'm not confusing you too much. I have a bit of rambling).
SO THOUSANDS OF THANKS for sharing this with us and heartfelt requests to finish this story! I can't even imagine it in my head. Only you-the INCREDIBLE WRITER AND CREATOR OF THIS MASTERPIECE-can do so! DO IT FOR all your fans! We all love you and your writing! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! (I hope I'm not freaking you out though. I get excited too...a bit too often).
| A Little Bit of Reality chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
8 years! NOOOO! WHAT ABOUT 2013? PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE!
| A Little Bit of Reality chapter 19 . 10/9/2013
I just finished reading all 19 chapters in one go! And I couldn't stop re-reading! I love SETH and ANNA! They have such an aamazing chemistry and I love that Seth is so mysterious and he is so nice and...he's just so goddamn perfect! I LOVE SETH! He has to be one of the best male characters ever! Please update! I adore this story and I want to read more and more! I have a feeling you are going to come with many heartrending twists and I can't wait! YOU are an amazing writer! Truly amazing!
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/28/2013
Amaaaazing story. Now that I have read till this point I need to get some sleep
Will begging for an update help? I see you last updated in '05.. Well I hope you're still alive and continue this one day. Really shaped up nicely later
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/28/2013
I must say, your writing style really progressed. The chapters I am reading now compared to how you started off are much improved. Really enjoyable to read
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/28/2013
I actually really loved this chapter.. Wondering why you didn't like it
| Dominique Diane chapter 19 . 9/2/2013
I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE! It's so awesome! I need to know what's going to happen, please! Seth is so lovable!
| Lover of Cute chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
Kyaaaaaaaaaa! They are so CUTE! I love it! Her dad's an arse though... I love the concept of Rae and Anna being twins. Kya! The ending is so cute I just can't get over it! I LOVE THIS!
| LaurentheHunter chapter 19 . 7/15/2013
I absolutely love this story! You're such a good writer
| PenPegs chapter 1 . 7/6/2013