|Reviews for Seeing Through Tears|
| TofuSensei chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I have followed this story for a couple years now. I happy to see the revisions! I noticed them immediately and I think they add more detail to your writing.
I do, however, miss the old ending. Ending it with "she never did explain what a sonnet was" is both humorous, and provides a bit of a cliff hanger. This new ending feels a little too thought out compared to the old one.
I'm not saying it's bad... just different.
Anyways, here's my constructive criticism! Thanks for the story
| basementdwellerextrodinair chapter 19 . 6/17/2009
This story kicks some epic ass, usually I try to steer clear of the whole 'Abuse young girl' drama thing. But this is really, really, good. Your characters are well rounded and original and yeah, pretty much a joy to read.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| TammyS3 chapter 18 . 6/15/2009
My favorite thing about this story is when you UPDATE! and POST THE NEXT CHAPTERS! Which you haven't done in around 4 years! Come on! I LOVE this story! it is one of my favorites! Please, figure something out and bring me the next chapter! PLEASE! I'd honestly love you forever!
| quackerrox chapter 19 . 6/15/2009
UPDATE THIS STORY BEFORE I GO NUTS :D
| Michele.Elizabeth chapter 19 . 6/14/2009
This story is 100% my favorite story on fiction press, i so wish you would update! this is a beautiful story, really wonderful and i love every second of it and could read it over and over again... and i have, i have been in love with this story since before the last update. that's years! i'm still faithful and believe 100% you can do it! cant wait to read more!
| M0jojojo chapter 19 . 6/10/2009
no no no no! dont stop now! u cant do that to me! i'm missing studying for my chemistry final to find out what happened! now im gonna daze through the rest of the week just thinking of the story! (its very very good, aside from the spelling mistakes. but it seems like u get inspired randomly, and when ur inspired randomly it sucks monkeys to reread ur chapter doesnt it? i dont kw, im just seeing it from my perspective.) UPDATE NOW!
| M0jojojo chapter 15 . 6/10/2009
no u didnt, no YOU DIDNT! oh my God oh my God!
(the writer in me thinks its a great move for the story but the swooning female? the female is screaming bloody murder...)
| M0jojojo chapter 14 . 6/10/2009
i am in love.
u, my dear, are a WONDERFUL WRITER. yes, i capitalized that.
and i like ur author notes! they're as long as mine are!
| smurf-love chapter 18 . 5/30/2009
you know i just thought of a great way if you want to end this story or write more,
you can have anna talking of the cell her brother gave her, and her dad walk in the room...
then her brother heres him beating her and all the stuff gets everyone to rush over to the house to save her, she dad goes to jail and anna lives with her brother...lol i thought it looked good in my head so i thought i would share my idea
| Fiasco Can Fly chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Ah, I see. You haven't updated since 05'.
Damn. :) But I enjoyed what was put up till then:)
| Fiasco Can Fly chapter 19 . 5/28/2009
You know, I usually don't review often, you know on other people's stories? Horrible of me, yes, I know. Becuase I love reviews. But this story is fuc*ing incredible. No joke, mate. This seriously made my eyes water in one of the previous chapters, when Seth threw the vase down? That just . . . words can't even describe. And, I'll just admit that when I saw how many reviews this had gotten, I shied away a little, becuase I like to give feedback to those writers who are just starting out, you know? But the first chapter caught me, and I ignored all of my other homework and reports just to finish through this chapter.
Continue, please? I'd love to read more:)
Thanks for writing it, I enjoy the emotions.
And I just can't deny what a sexy beast Seth is:)
-That Girl is a Fiasco
| Dee chapter 19 . 5/27/2009
I'm in love with this story. The plot has definately grasped my attention and the characters are complex... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Noctame chapter 19 . 5/26/2009
MOAR! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR ELSE!
| MelissaJoy chapter 19 . 5/22/2009
So i totally enjoyed reading this story but I wish that you would update this son! k. thanks
| Goin'on-a-pancake-high chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I luv this story!haha im like a crazy person checking ur story constantly to c if u updated. Dont give up on it, the way u left things makes me curious. Update soon plz! ;)