Reviews for No Tomorrow
howdylv08 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Aww that was cute! It got sort of depressed in the middle like 'I'm not good enough for you' But then you pulled out 'I'm nothing without you.' That always works. Good job.

Sophie :3
whyt forest chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
excellent. you've got the potential to write much better, that's clear. i found the poem beautiful but a little sad as well. i like the repitition of the the 'your our of reach voice sings, stay with me...'

~whyt forest